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Post by Aisu Wed Mar 19, 2008 1:15 pm

Panah hati melesat tajam..dn menghujamku dlam keheningan malam yg abadi.. Disisi batas rindu dan benci, kulihat sbuah luka yg brdarah airmata,sunyi hati ini meratap.. Tangisan senja,terdengar pilu diantara angin yg bernyanyi tentang 'cinta'..
Gema2 takdir dtang membwa senyuman yg berakhir dlam mimpi.. Sedih hati ini mengungkap..
Di bawah temaram purnama,hati ini menari tiada henti,menanti waktu yg kembali pulang..membawakan perisai cinta, untuk hati ini..yg terkoyak.. Bawakan aq perisai cinta.. Agar panah hati dapat kupatahkan dalam senyuman..
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Post by Lee Wed Mar 19, 2008 3:54 pm

Ni puisi ato lagu y....:ndomblong:


Bagus buanget euy susunan kata2nya......:rangkul:
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Post by Aisu Wed Mar 19, 2008 3:59 pm

Karena saking bingungny maw nulis apa,akhirnya, trtulis jga apa yg trtampil dilayar hp..hehe
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Post by a.L Fri Mar 21, 2008 9:45 pm


;) aisu.. bisa jadi penulis neh/... :mikir: apa jangan2 udh penulis bneran neh :P
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Post by Saito_aoyama Sun Mar 23, 2008 3:37 pm

Q bleh pesen 1 g novel na..?... :read:
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Post by neo_boys Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:59 pm

keren woi kata2nya puitis bgt *grins*
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Post by kyoshi Sat Sep 13, 2008 9:04 pm


wah bru smalem baca ni sambil muter reila-nya gazette..
nyonya aisu matsumoto kapan neh update blog-nya? *grins*
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